Tuesday, October 31, 2023

GET ME REWRITE: Editing a New York Times headline

 
From what Retiring Guy hears, it's not the time to talk about gun sense.
 
Unedited headlineNew York Times, 10/31/2023

Lucy is holding the ball.


Related posts: 
2023
More guns, more carnage (Kansas City edition).  (1/3)

2022
GUN CRAZY collage: More guns, more gun violence.  (series)
GUN CRAZY collage: More gun sales = more gun deaths.  (8/13)
Gun crazy in Oconomowoc, Wisconsin: Library board votes to allow guns inside the building.  (7/17)
Look in the mirror, Janel; you're the problem.  (4/5)

2021
Sunday doubleheader: (Gun Nonsense League)  (6/6)
USA!!! USA!!! USA!!! We're boogying our way to doomsday.  (5/30)

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