GET ME REWRITE: Editing a New York Times headline

 

From what Retiring Guy hears, it's not the time to talk about gun sense.

 

Unedited headline:  New York Times, 10/31/2023

Lucy is holding the ball.

Related posts: 

2023

Members of the Maine State Senate have blood on their hands.  (10/26)

More guns, more carnage (Milwaukee WI edition).  (9/12)

More guns, more carnage (Madison WI edition).  (9/11)

Safe Storage program doomed to fail as long as USA gun nonsense prevails.  (8/28)

Milwaukee Journal Sentinel subscribers treated to fill-in-the-blank headline.  (6/1)

More guns, more carnage (Milwaukee Wisconsin edition).  (5/31)

More guns, more carnage.  (5/9) 

More guns, more carnage (Philadelphia edition).  (5/2)

More guns, more carnage (Dallas Texas edition).  (4/16)

More guns, more carnage (GOP statehouses edition).  (3/31)

More guns, more carnage (Wisconsin edition).  (3/20)

More guns, more carnage (Dallas Texas edition).  (3/19)

More gun, more carnage.  (Wisconsin edition).  (2/18)  

More guns, more carnage.  (Virginia edition).  (1/11)

More guns, more carnage (Kansas City edition).  (1/3)

2022

Milwaukee officials let legislators who oppose gun control off the hook.  (7/30)

More guns, more carnage (New York City edition).   (12/29)

More guns, more carnage:  Philadelphia edition.  (12/19)

Gun Crazy vicious circle: More guns, more gun violence, more death and injury, more guns......  (11/28)

Gun crazy Texas edition.  (10/29)

GUN CRAZY collage: More guns, more gun violence.  (series)

GUN CRAZY collage: More gun sales = more gun deaths.  (8/13)

Gun crazy in Oconomowoc, Wisconsin: Library board votes to allow guns inside the building.  (7/17)

Exhibit A of how sick the USA has become as a society.  (5/26)

Look in the mirror, Janel; you're the problem.  (4/5)

Rep. Shae Sortwell (R-Two Rivers) introduces bill to increase gun violence.  (1/18)

2021

Sunday doubleheader: (Gun Nonsense League)  (6/6)

USA!!! USA!!! USA!!! We're boogying our way to doomsday.  (5/30)